osaka haiku

A haiku can be loosely defined as a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven and five.
As a direct consequence of the above definition, the Osaka-related haiku seen below happened.
If you can do better (or worse), please post your Osaka-related haiku in the comments section.

Osaka sandwich
Between Kyoto and Kobe
Without mayonnaise

Concrete Sky Building
Looms large over the concrete
That is Osaka

Boiling hot summers
And freezing cold in winter
There is nothing else

Many arms moving
Chopped into little pieces
It's takoyaki

Osaka, Tokyo
A friendly rivalry, yes?
Or full of hatred

In the day all grey
At night a neon light show
Next day hangover
On Monday, 19 June, 2006,
Anonymous said:
On Monday, 19 June, 2006,
Anonymous said:
Did the Samurai wear blue?
I`m not really sure
(not entirely Osaka related though timely?)
Apologies :)
On Monday, 19 June, 2006,
Anonymous said:
It seems a lot like Tokyo
Only dirtier
On Monday, 19 June, 2006,
KJ said:
Australia beat Japan
And next, Croatia
On Tuesday, 20 June, 2006,
Anonymous said:
England are bad winners yes,
but Aus, crap losers.
On Wednesday, 21 June, 2006,
Val said:
Scary, crowded,confusing.
That's just the station!
On Friday, 23 June, 2006,
KJ said:
And for the first time ever,
The "Final 16".
On Friday, 23 June, 2006,
Between daisies said:
Mccartenys Birthday basho
He didn't come
On Saturday, 22 July, 2006,
Anonymous said:
Osaka Japan is where they told me
but it might be Tokyou
hmm I fallowed the 5 7 5 but its different cuz in Japan . its 5 7 5 letters...not words.
On Tuesday, 29 December, 2009,
Anonymous said:
Dotonburi crazed neon
Tennoji street man
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